Who Dunnit Writing

Chapter One

SPLASH! I dive into the water, I stand up and the freshwater is running down my face. It's amazing. Until CRASH! AHHHH all of the gear bags are GONE!! I get dressed out of my black togs into my fav outfit, my TSC (Thames Swimming Club or Taylors So Cool) Hoodie with my Flower top and black tights. I run out of the girls changing and see Melia staring at me… She's acting sus… I bet she dunnit, she stole the gear bags, she doesn’t have one!

 I’II go and confront her. “Melia I know what you did!” I say in a confident voice.
 “Uhhhhhh… What did I do?” Melia said, confused!
 “Don’t play dum we all know it was you” I said.
 “What was me?” Melia says. 
“Okay then,” I say… You stole all of the gear bags because you don’t have one! 
“Ummm….. No!” said Melia.
 “I’m telling Chloe.” 
“Melia, here's your gear bag,” Chole says (The swimming Couch).
“Thank you, Chloe,'' said Melia with a merk on her face.
“Uhhhhh….. Ummmmm……” I say weirdly, “I'm just gonna go…..”

Chapter Two
BANG I slam the door to the girl's bathroom. Hhgregg that's so embarrassing I feel sooooooo bad I should say sorry to Melia. I can never go show my face out with all of my swimming mates ever again. Ahggggggg, come on it's not that bad, Take a deep breath and face them. BANG the door shuts. “Hiiiiiiiiii, ummmm sorry about before.” 
“I told you that I didn’t do anything!” Melia said I’m gonna say it….. I told you so.
“I know I should've trusted you. I just wanted my gear bag back, I just…..” I say
“It’s fine it’s all good under the hood” she said
“Thanks for understanding” I said
Sooooo, who actually stole all of the gear bags?? I thought…. 

Chapter Three
“Taylor.. Taylor… TAYLOR!!!” Mum screams
“what…”
“Oh honey it’s time to get ready for swimming.”
“MUM it’s 4:00 in the morning I have One more HOUR!!”
“Oh it’s great to be early come on”
10 minutes later
*snore* *snore* *snore* 
TAYLOR!!!” Mum screams once again
(FINALLY, GET UP)
The wind is blowing in my hair making my lips cold. I get back into my seat and close the window. I start thinking about all of the gear bags that have been stolen. Maybe there back, maybe somebody brought them back, maybe just maybe. I get excited when we get to the Thames pool, I run out and go straight to the gear bag container. 
“TAYLOR walks don’t run by the pool,” says Chloe 
“Ok fine,” I say well fast walking as fast as I can. My mouth dropped, I saw somebody wearing a black coat. It’s really weird!

Chapter Four
I run after the stage person, I can’t run anymore, I slow down and I can’t see them anymore. But, I can’t stop now I have to find the gear bags, I have to. I keep running and running and you guessed it… RUNNING! I take a wrong turn and end up in the scary alleyway. THUMP! BANG! RATATAT! I try to scream but nothing comes out. It's, It’s.. a Kitty Cat??? Meeeeoooowwww! The cuteness of the Alleycat is affecting me. I have to pet it!! Here kitty, kitty. HISSSSSSSSS! Ahhhh! I resist the cuteness of the Kitty cat and run to find the real reason why I was there. I Sprint back to the pools and find this homeless person on the side of the pools with all of the gear bags beside her. I bolted over to her and stopped… she was crying…. 
Why??? Ummmm, Miss are you ok??? I said shyly
“I did something…. Something bad” she said “I stole all of the Thames Swimming gear bags and I feel bad about it, I just want to swim too.”
“Ok Ok, Thames Swimming will buy you your own gear bag and only if you give the gear bags to me,” I said excitingly
“Yes Yes 1,000 times YES!” she screamed in excitement! 
So she gives me all of the gear bags and she started learning to swim and that’s how Lauren Boyle started to be a famous NZ swimmer!!